"Yes, the word とき means "when" in English. Also in this case, まえ does not function as a position word. It's a time expression." "まえのひ means "previous day" and つぎのひ means "next day". You can use these when you can not use "yesterday" or "tomorrow"."
It's a very good comment, but I have to point out a couple of parts. 1st, "私をおしえて あそこで いい店が たくさん ありました。" I think you wanted to say "Please tell me there are many good stores there." Then you may want to bring "please tell me" part at the end in Japanese, and place "are there many good stores there?" upfront. 2nd, "あそこも ひとが たくさん いますが たのしいです。" When you connect two facts you use te-form for the 1st part. Also when you connect 2 contrast facts you use "が" instead of te-form. In your comment you listed "there are many people there, too." and "it's fun." However, do you think these 2 facts are in contrast? I think these 2 are in the same side and it could be much natural to connect these 2 facts by te-form. Oops, there are 2 more as a matter of fact in the last sentence. "えきのちかく" could be the place where you watch (or watched?) girls then you should pick another particle instead of "に". At last, "girls" should be "おんなのこ" instead of "おんあのこ". ニックさん、どうもありがとう。
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Accura
"Yes, the word とき means "when" in English. Also in this case, まえ does not function as a position word. It's a time expression." "まえのひ means "previous day" and つぎのひ means "next day". You can use these when you can not use "yesterday" or "tomorrow"."
Nov 9, 2013
Accura
ニックさん、コメントありがとう。
It's a very good comment, but I have to point out a couple of parts. 1st, "私をおしえて あそこで いい店が たくさん ありました。" I think you wanted to say "Please tell me there are many good stores there." Then you may want to bring "please tell me" part at the end in Japanese, and place "are there many good stores there?" upfront. 2nd, "あそこも ひとが たくさん いますが たのしいです。" When you connect two facts you use te-form for the 1st part. Also when you connect 2 contrast facts you use "が" instead of te-form. In your comment you listed "there are many people there, too." and "it's fun." However, do you think these 2 facts are in contrast? I think these 2 are in the same side and it could be much natural to connect these 2 facts by te-form. Oops, there are 2 more as a matter of fact in the last sentence. "えきのちかく" could be the place where you watch (or watched?) girls then you should pick another particle instead of "に". At last, "girls" should be "おんなのこ" instead of "おんあのこ". ニックさん、どうもありがとう。
Dec 6, 2013
stella kwale
Good Day,
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Have a nice day
Thanks God bless.
Mrs Stella.
Sep 21, 2015